You pitch it pretty good, I'm impressed. I have a bit of trouble with your diction and intonation, I don't know the original... (so I'm not sure if you were just mimicking that) but you say pl-ace (and stress the l) I want to throw toast at you. Also be wary of the way you say mountain, or any other words with t in them. try to avoid the "moundin" variation...
Overall, it was nice. Folksy and quaint, I liked it. :)
mikew114
yep this is defanatly a post!
Evark
Man, I was totally under the impression it was a comment on my userpage. LEARN SOMETHING NEW EVERY DAY.